The story worth telling
If the picture already shows a button being clicked, the voice does not need to announce the click. Use that time to explain the choice or consequence. Read the script while watching the recording and remove lines that arrive too late.
Three things to capture
- The user’s starting problem
- The action and decision
- The visible outcome
Let the camera run a little before and after each action. Those extra seconds give you room to find a better cut.
Give the edit a shape
Describe the job in plain language
Explain the decision the screen cannot explain
Connect the outcome to the job
Before you share it
Check that every product claim is demonstrated or clearly qualified. Remove invented metrics and unsupported savings.